jhormiga
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 16:21:03 GMT
Post by jhormiga on Sept 22, 2015 16:21:03 GMT
Hola a todos! Here come a new challenger!! xDD Después de los apoyos que me han dado en un conocido foro español sobre retro  , he decidido presentar mi 'opera prima': P-NoidP-Noid es una video aventura clásica donde el personaje principal debe avanzar por el mapeado para encontrar los 5 huevos que ha perdido. Sin embargo, para poder avanzar en la aventura hay que encontrar diferentes items que 'mejoran' las habilidades del protagonista y permiten acceder a partes del mapa imposibles de acceder sin el item correspondiente. He metido también 2-3 puzzles (sencillos) para poder avanzar en el mapa, así como mecanismos para que zonas del mapeado cambien y haya que volver a visitarlas  Decir que el trabajo lo estoy haciendo yo solo usando la Churrera de los Mojo Twins. No soy grafista ni musico y, a decir verdad, no estoy muy contento con los gráficos (y más viendo el nivel del concurso). Como llevo todo el verano con el juego, está casi acabado (ventajas de usar 'La Churrera'). Aún así, me quedan por pulir varias cosillas como la pantalla de loading, traducir al inglés los pocos textos que tiene, mejoras en el inventario... A ver en que acaba todo esto  Nota: ¿Puede alguien corregir mi traducción al inglés?  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey guys!! Here come a new challenger!! xDDD Because the support received by several people of a retro known Spanish forum  I have decided to present my 'opera prima': P-Noid P-Noid is a classic video-adventure game where the main character must advance across the map to find 5 lost eggs. However, in order to advance the adventure you have to find different items to improve the main character's skills which will allow to reach different places of the map. The game has 2-3 puzzles (easy) that you'll have to resolve if you want to reach some areas of the map as well as switches that change areas in the map (so you'll have to re-visit this areas). I'm doing all work by myself using Mojo Twins' Churrera engine. I'm not a graphic designer or musician. So, actually, I'm not very happy with the game graphics. I have been making the game during this summer. For this reason, It's almost over. Even so, I still have to fix several little things like loading screen, translate into English the few texts that it has, improvements in inventory ... Let's see how finish this experience   
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 18:01:49 GMT
Post by rmartins on Sept 22, 2015 18:01:49 GMT
Welcome aboard the band wagon  Your graphics are fine, but currently it seems somewhat monochromatic due to too much white. You should add a little bit more color and it will make a huge difference. TIP: Take a look at "Rick Dangerous" brick sprites, for some inspiration on adding some color to your bricks/stones. 
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 18:49:03 GMT
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Post by alxinho on Sept 22, 2015 18:49:03 GMT
Qué bien qué bien! Al final te has animado!
Bueno, sabiendo que tu mayor preocupación son los gráficos decirte que vamos, que los hay muchísimo peores y es más, es que no son malos, son muy simpáticos y tienen personalidad, lo que pasa es que el uso del color te hace creer que no son buenos.
Yo con muchas ganas de jugarlo, y por cierto ¿qué explicación tiene el nombre?
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Really nice to see you around!
If your biggest problem are the graphics, I would say dont worry, as I have seen much worse than that and nevertheless they are not bad at all, I find them cute and with personality, the only thing is that maybe the color makes you think they are not.
What is the story behind the name?
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 19:42:14 GMT
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Post by climacus on Sept 22, 2015 19:42:14 GMT
Otro más en liza!!! La cosa se pone que arde. Estoy de acuerdo con los rivales, digo compañeros, los gráficos son muy simpáticos. Con un poco más de color seguro que queda todo genial.
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And another one joins us!
This is getting more and more interesting! I agree with the rest, those graphics are really cute. With a little bit more colour they will look great.
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 20:11:42 GMT
Post by Ivanzx on Sept 22, 2015 20:11:42 GMT
Welcome here!!  I was one of those who supported you and wanted you to participate here, so I am happy to see you around  The game also sounds interesting, specially as you have added a couple of nice twists to what the Churrera offers by default, and the graphics, to be your first job in the Spectrum, they look cutish! As Rui has told you, probably people will give you some ideas that maybe can improve them, but they are not that bad as you said, not at all  Good luck and enjoy here  --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Bienvenido por aqui! Me alegro verte en la Dev, yo era uno de los que te di la murga para que participaras  El juego pinta interesante, sobre todo por esos detalles que le has agregado a lo que la churrera ofrece de primeras y que le van a dar profundidad al juego, creo yo  Los graficos no estan nada mal para ser tu primer trabajo en el Spectrum, tienen un no sé qué que me gustan en serio  La gente de aqui tambien estoy seguro que te daran ideas que lo mismo sirven para mejorarlos, pero que ni de lejos son tan malos como tu decias! Suerte, coge sitio comodo y a disfrutar 
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JB
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 20:37:46 GMT
Post by JB on Sept 22, 2015 20:37:46 GMT
Hola ! Pues a mi me gusta, le da mucha personalidad  Me parece un buen trabajo ! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello! I actually like it, it adds personality to the game That is a good job!
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 20:45:05 GMT
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Post by alxinho on Sept 22, 2015 20:45:05 GMT
Lo ves?  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Don´t you see it? 
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jhormiga
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P-Noid
Sept 22, 2015 21:37:14 GMT
Post by jhormiga on Sept 22, 2015 21:37:14 GMT
Welcome aboard the band wagon  Your graphics are fine, but currently it seems somewhat monochromatic due to too much white. You should add a little bit more color and it will make a huge difference. TIP: Take a look at "Rick Dangerous" brick sprites, for some inspiration on adding some color to your bricks/stones.  I'll try it, thanks  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Gracias a todos por los ánimos  Como bien habeis comentado, coloreando el tileset seguro que queda todo mejor. Lo dificil va a ser la pantalla de loading/ending xD El nombre no tiene un porque. 'Penguin Adventure' ya estaba pillado así que tuve que buscarme otro  Por buscarle una razón: mi idea era hacer una videoaventura tipo metroid y el prota es un pingüino xD ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Thanks guys for your support. As we have commented, if I put color in the tileset, everything will look better. But the really difficult thing will be the loading and ending screens xD I haven't any reason for the name. 'Penguin Adventure' was already caught so I had to find another name  Maybe the reason is: I wanted to do a 'metroid like' game and as the protagonist is a penguin xD
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jhormiga
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I've been cursed for 7 years...
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P-Noid
Sept 24, 2015 13:00:04 GMT
Post by jhormiga on Sept 24, 2015 13:00:04 GMT
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P-Noid
Sept 24, 2015 15:24:22 GMT
Post by Ivanzx on Sept 24, 2015 15:24:22 GMT
Joer, de verdad que me gusta mucho ese sprite del pingüino!
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I really like the penguin sprite eh!
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P-Noid
Sept 24, 2015 15:52:02 GMT
Post by catweazle on Sept 24, 2015 15:52:02 GMT
Looks great & I like the graphics! I think the penguin character looks particularly cute  I think a few splashes of colour here & there would be nice, sure - but the monochrome white-on-black works for me (and, yay no attribute clash!) 
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P-Noid
Sept 24, 2015 18:11:53 GMT
Post by alxinho on Sept 24, 2015 18:11:53 GMT
A mí me ponen palote los fantasmas!  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I really love the ghosts!
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P-Noid
Sept 24, 2015 18:12:29 GMT
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Post by climacus on Sept 24, 2015 18:12:29 GMT
Qué buena pinta!!! Tengo ganas de ver al pingüi en movimiento.
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It looks fantastic. Im looking forward to see the Penguin moving
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P-Noid
Sept 26, 2015 12:31:56 GMT
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Post by GAMER 80 on Sept 26, 2015 12:31:56 GMT
El pingüino mola, ya tengo ganas de jugar con el.
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P-Noid
Oct 4, 2015 23:04:47 GMT
Post by Ivanzx on Oct 4, 2015 23:04:47 GMT
From what I can read, it will have a complex Churrera structure, right? I mean, use of objects, puzzle components and revisit part of the map  Will the penguin be able to shoot? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Por o que leo será un juego de la Churrera, pero de los más complejos, con uso de objetos, un componente puzle y tener que revisitar mapeado para ir descubriendo nuevos lugares, no? Podrá disparar el pinguino?
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